Scroll VIThe Men Who Smiled Too Much

Thebes — Year 4 of My Reign
Translated and restored for the modern traveler.


*[Suggested Visual: A young Tutankhamun seated on the throne in half-shadow, several advisors around him with polite smiles that do not reach their eyes.]

AI Prompt: “Young Tutankhamun age 10 on Egyptian throne in dim hall, advisors around him smiling politely with hidden tension, cinematic realism.”*


**Prologue — Not Every Enemy Wears a Snarl.

Some Wear a Smile.**

The world teaches children
to fear monsters.

But court life taught me
to fear smiles.

Not the warm ones.
Not the honest ones.
But the smiles
that stretched too wide,
lingered too long,
flashed too easily
in moments that required
gravity instead.

I was ten
when I began to recognize
the men who smiled
too much.

Their smiles
were not expressions.

They were weapons.

This scroll
is how I learned
to see them.


PART I — The Day the Crook and Flail Felt Heavy

It began
the morning after the Festival
of a Thousand Lamps.

I sat upon my throne—
the lions’ heads gleaming,
the cool gold
biting into my palms.

Ay approached
with the same
measured smile
he always wore.

“Majesty,”
he said,
“the people adore you.
Your reign
grows stronger every day.”

His smile
did not warm his eyes.

Horemheb stepped forward next,
armor shining,
posture rigid.

“Majesty,
the celebrations raised morale.
The army’s loyalty
is firm.”

He smiled too.

A soldier’s smile—
but forced.

Then the temple officials
came with their own smiles.

The treasury scribes
with theirs.

The nomarchs
with polished, oily ones.

Every man who came
to praise me

smiled.

And it struck me
suddenly, painfully:

None of them
were smiling for me.

They were smiling
for themselves.

For what they thought
they could gain.

For what they believed
I did not see.

But I did.


PART II — Ankhesenamun Sees It Too

That evening,
Ankhesenamun found me
pacing in the courtyard.

“You look troubled,”
she said.

“They smiled,”
I muttered.

“They always smile,”
she replied lightly.

“Not like today,”
I said.

She studied me.

“You’re growing up,”
she said softly.
“That’s all.”

“What does growing up
have to do with smiles?”

She touched my hand.

“It means you’re learning
which ones lie.”


PART III — The First False Praise

Two days after the festival,
the court gathered
in the audience hall.

A nomarch from Middle Egypt
approached the throne.

He bowed deeply.

“Majesty,”
he said loudly,
“your festival
has restored the spirit
of the Two Lands.
Never in my life
have I seen such unity.”

His words were honey.

His smile was sweet.

Too sweet.

I thanked him politely.

Then he added:

“If it pleases His Majesty,
my district would benefit
from increased grain allotments.”

I paused.

The smile didn’t falter.

“Is Middle Egypt hungry?”
I asked.

He hesitated.

Just a flicker.

“No, Majesty,”
he said quickly.
“But the festival
caused shortages for us.”

He hadn’t been there.

I knew it.

His smile widened
as if to cover the lie.

And I realized:

Praise
is the softest mask
for greed.


PART IV — The Man Who Watched Me Too Closely

Horemheb
became more attentive
after the festival.

He watched me
in council.

Watched me
in ceremonies.

Watched me
while I walked
through the palace.

He smiled
—but not kindly.

His was
a soldier’s smile:
tight, controlled,
a line across the face
meant to hide
calculations.

One afternoon
in the training yard,
he approached me.

“Majesty,”
he said,
“I am pleased
at your growing confidence.”

He smiled.

And then:

“But confidence
can lead to mistakes.”

The smile deepened.

“Let those
with experience
guide you.”

A warning.

Spoken from behind a smile.

I bowed my head
in politeness.

But inside,
something hardened.

I am not a puppet
dangling from your strings.

And Horemheb
was beginning to sense
that I knew it.


PART V — Ay’s Hand on My Shoulder

Ay’s smiles
were different.

Softer.
Measured.
Practiced.

The smiles
of a man
who had outlived
three reigns
and intended
to survive a fourth.

One morning,
he placed a gentle hand
on my shoulder.

“Majesty,”
he said,
“I worry for you.”

I looked up.

“Why?”

“You trust people
too easily.”

His smile
was kind.

Almost fatherly.

But I heard
the truth beneath it:

Trust me.
Not them.

I stepped away
from his hand.

And his smile—
for a moment—

cracked.

Just a little.

Just enough.


PART VI — The Feast of Gentle Voices

That month,
Ay arranged a royal feast
to celebrate the restoration
of the temples.

Every official
came bearing honeyed words.

“Majesty, your wisdom shines—”
“Majesty, your reign brings peace—”
“Majesty, you are destined for greatness—”

Smiles.
Smiles.
Smiles.

They poured praise over me
like perfumed oil.

Too thick.
Too warm.
Too suffocating.

And every compliment
carried a request:

More grain.
More land.
More rations.
More gold.
More privileges.

It was not a feast.

It was a net.

And I was meant to be caught.

But I smiled too.

A small smile.

A polite smile.

A smile they mistook
for innocence.

A smile that meant:

I see you.
All of you.


PART VII — The Eavesdropped Whisper

The turning point
came late one night.

I walked
down the corridor
behind the council chamber.

Ay’s voice
echoed softly
from behind the door.

“He is too beloved,”
Ay whispered.

My breath froze.

Horemheb replied:

“Beloved kings
grow dangerous.”

Ay’s voice
lowered further:

“We must guide him.
Firmly.
Carefully.”

“And if he refuses?”
Horemheb asked.

Silence.

Then Ay said:

“Then we will do
what must be done.”

My hand
tightened around my cane.

A coldness
spread through my chest.

Until that night,
I had believed
they wanted to shape me.

But now I understood:

They also believed
they could break me.


PART VIII — Ankhesenamun’s Fury

When I told her
what I heard,
Ankhesenamun’s eyes flashed.

“They dare?”
she hissed.
“They dare think
they can control you?”

She paced
across my chamber.

“Tut…
you must be careful.
We cannot confront them now.
Not yet.”

“Why not?” I asked.

“Because the moment
you show fear,
they will see weakness.
And the moment
you show strength,
they will test it.”

She stopped.

Placed her hands
on my shoulders.

“Survive them first.
Defy them later.”

Her words
were sharper
than any dagger.

And truer
than any priestly blessing.


PART IX — The Boy Who Learned to Smile Back

The next day,
I returned to court.

Ay smiled.

Horemheb smiled.

The scribes smiled.

The officials smiled.

And when they bowed
and said:

“Majesty,
you honor us with your presence,”

I smiled too.

A small smile.

A silent smile.

A smile
that said:

I am watching.

A smile
that said:

I am learning.

A smile
that hid
the first spark
of a ruler
they would soon fear.


**Epilogue — Beware the Hands That Touch Your Throne

with Too Much Tenderness**

Years later,
when people ask
how I learned
to be Pharaoh—

I tell them this:

A throne
is not protected
by lions.

It is protected
by wisdom.

And wisdom
begins with seeing:

Not all enemies
stand against you.

Some stand beside you.

Closer.
Quieter.
Smiling.

I was ten
when I learned
to smile back.

And that was the day
I stopped being a symbol—

and began becoming
a king.


FINAL CTA — Walk the Halls Where Tut Learned to See Power Clearly

If you want to walk the corridors
where whispers traveled faster than truth,
where smiles hid ambitions,
where Tutankhamun began to understand
the dangerous beauty of power—

walk them with ENA.

Journey with ENA.
Not all daggers shine.
Some smile.

Historical Context

Tutankhamun ruled under the guidance—and likely control—of powerful officials such as Ay and Horemheb. Their influence shaped policy and succession planning.

This scroll interprets political imbalance through narrative tension, reflecting known power structures without claiming documented conspiratorial meetings.